Presentation and Class Feedback

Positive Feedback

'Good ideas. '

'I found their video very effective, it made people want to watch it'

'Good poster design, fabulous ideas'

'Very good presentation'
'Good understanding of target audience and clear voices from both'

'Smartphone Logo (target audience). Good use of stats. Logo and Poster good. Video good.'

'Speaks clear and loud'

'Presented well, both spoke loudly and clearly. Answered all questions within the presentation and covered all areas of progress. Great logo and poster ideas, e.g. smartphone attracts target audience. Great use of statistics and conventions. Links back to the brief.'

Things to improve

'The posters are all the same and rather plain and could do with different types of posters and not reading off a script.'

'Speak a bit slower have more people in your video'

'Video sound could if been better and abut too much writing but nice PowerPoint'

'Polly spoke a little to fast to understand what she was saying sometimes and they went through the slides quite quickly'

'Couldn't hear what was being said in their film.'

'In their advert they need to cut out the interferance with the mic'

 A bit difficult to hear the documentary

Clear presentation with good ideas and great end products. Spoke clearly and explained everything with good points

'A lot of writing but I couldn't see it. 

 Couldnt really hear the film beucase of the wind and cars